
Shruti left the house with a pistol to kill her husband and end the issue forever.There was a confusion of thoughts in her head.
An ordinary fisherman named Sameer was living in Shruti’s village.
I have expressed his lifestyle in simple language here. In the following rhyme
Ordinary People
Life of the ordinary people
Straightforward and simple
The Sun rises and sets
They’re busy with fishing nets!!
In the low tide they cast nets
When It’s high tide they raise nets
Longing to fill stomach with food
They’re busy with separating seafood!!
As a normal person, people used to tease and use him as they wanted. Shruti’s husband used to take big fish from him and say, he would pay later. He was in debt but not paying.
So Sameer took a sporty but real looking pistol and came to Shruti’s husband’s place, where he is every day, in the building that had Symmetrical arched doors . Sameer’s plan was to intimidate him by showing him a pistol and get his fish money back

Sameer reached the building that had symmetrical arched doors in the gothic style. At the same time Shruti reached the second symmetrical arched door. Sameer raised a pistol on Shruti’s husband and at the same time Shruti aimed the pistol and shot her husband. Shruti’s bodybuilder husband collapsed to the ground and a stream of blood gushed out of his chest like a fountain.
I have explained Sameer’s miserable situation in this haiku poem.
The sound of gun shot
He smelled gun muzzled near him
And he was puzzled
This post is part of #Writephoto
https://weeklyprompts.com/2021/09/18/weekly-prompts-weekend-challenge-ordinary/
Stream of Consciousness Saturday
Thank you for reading.
Stay Blessed!
Here rhyme pattern is AABB and first try of haiku poem
I wondered how it was going to end. Great introduction of a third character who also had a vendetta. Really fun use of the photo. Thank you so much for joining in the challenge:
KL ❤
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Thanks for appreciation 😌
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Now this is taking a curious turn 🙂 Kudos!
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Thanks ☺️
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Revenge – Part 2 – by Jane Aguiar
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Thank you 😊
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Reblogged this on OPENED HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Thank you!
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Thank you as well for another nice posting. Enjoy your weekend! xx Michael
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:-))
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Thank you ❣️
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Intriguing… and there’s a part 2…
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Oh, they were linked int he wrong order, sorry, must go back to part 1 now….
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Yeah!😊
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Thank you so much ❤️
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Thank you for joining us and for more of your intriguing tale.
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Thank you so much 💓
Please read part I. The story is continued in reena’s xploration challenge#199
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Oh, I thought I had previously done that. Thank you, I will take a look. 🙂
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I’m sending link….
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Love the twist at the end. Keep up the great story writing, I think you have a talent. Thanks for following my blog and I’d love to know what you like about my stories too. 🤗
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Yes, off course. I will visit your blog. You are most welcome and thank you so much for appreciation 🤗
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