Eyes wide open,
breath kept on hold.
Staring at the new one,
Am I getting old?
All duties are done,
still no one told.
You changed your tone,
Am I getting old?
Guarded your home,
from thieves, because I’m bold.
Still new member is come,
Am I getting old?
This post is part of What Do You See by Sadje
Thank you for reading.
Stay Blessed!
What a lovely poem Jane. There’s always a feeling of insecurity when a new and younger pet comes to live with the family. Thanks for joining in
LikeLiked by 2 people
Yeah! It’s true.When new puppy comes, they feel like this.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Indeed.
LikeLiked by 2 people
😊
LikeLiked by 2 people
Ah, I love this one, Jane. Clever and so fun. And, I adore the puppy pic. 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m so happy to hear this. I too love puppies, Jeff😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m glad this is so; and, indeed, puppies are sooo cute and fun. You’re most welcome, Jane. 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yeah💯
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lovely, enjoyed the ‘bittersweet’ tone and lived the pics!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
So nicely written..loved the theme 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much 😊
LikeLike
It’s so sad watching how quickly our pets age. My cat is 14 now, but she still acts like a kitten sometimes, which makes me happy.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes, it’s true. Their life is short about 14 – 15 years only and Cats are always young or maybe they are active.
LikeLiked by 1 person
She thinks she’s young and that’s what counts 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes, exactly 💯
LikeLiked by 1 person
Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks 😊
LikeLike
Yeah, I’m at that age now. When the h**l did that happen?
LikeLiked by 1 person
I relate to the dog.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yeah, I understand 💜
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yeah, everyone becomes old at that stage but sometimes we never knew their feelings. They seek attention then also.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very nice write up Jane.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much 😊
LikeLike
Fun poem! It seems perfect for the picture prompt!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ahh, so sweet 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for sweetness 😊
LikeLike
Hahahaha that was fun. I enjoyed the read😊👍🏿
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much,Jermena 👍🏻
LikeLiked by 1 person
Luna’s getting on a bit (don’t tell her I said that) but she still has her kittenish moments. She played havoc with our older cat when she first came to live with us at 4 weeks old. Where does the time go…?
LikeLiked by 1 person
We had a Pomeranian dog in our house and as she got older we brought a small puppy but she would not let the puppy come near us. She used to sit at my feet .This happens, it’s a fact but after sometime they become friends…. Thank you so much for sharing, Chris ❣️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Awww the image you choosed for this poem made it really really cute ❤️❤️😅
And what a marvelous poem you wrote ,, i can feel the emotions in every word you pierced.
P.S (i love dogs 🤩)
LikeLiked by 1 person
I too love dogs…… thank you so much,Rabbia.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks 😊
LikeLike
Very very emotional poem,Jane !Loved it so much !
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Awwww, so sweet! I love animals so much. ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much 👍🏻
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Sadje🥀
LikeLike
Oh, how poignant this is! The bittersweetness of growing old and the insecurity that comes with being replaced. So so well written! Brilliant take on the prompt. Absolutely loved it and resonates so well with me.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Sam💜
LikeLike
Loved the picture prompt..
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh! Thanks a lot 🥀
LikeLike
Great poem. So cute and sad dogs get old so fast! 💕
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yeah! They get old so fast……. thank you 😍
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sooo true! Welcome🌷
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Surinder☺️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Welcome dear
LikeLiked by 1 person
😊
LikeLike
No ! you are not getting old . Man takes birth old and becomes younger and younger day in and day out . You might be surprised to know this . But think minutely . Like old man who needs care all the times , does not newly born baby needs care and help all the times ? So , how can you say you are getting old ? Never say so . Never feel so . I have seen ninety years old man running . Can I say he is getting old? No . Indian Philosophy says man never dies . He changes his form . All the PUNCH MAHABHUT i.e Earth , Sky , Water , Fire and Air , out of which the body of man is made up of , get lost into those elements . So , where is the question of getting old and old ? It is a layman’s approach to consider one as a old or so . Thanks !
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts 😊
LikeLike
Thanks .
LikeLiked by 1 person
😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
U seem so young nd energetic
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much 😊
LikeLike
Btw ….From where u belong u to
LikeLike
Btw ….From where u belong to
LikeLike
Then why you asking ….Am I getting old
LikeLiked by 1 person
It’s a dog that is becoming old. Photo prompt.
LikeLiked by 1 person
☺️
LikeLiked by 1 person
I think there is a lot more than puppies going on here. Beautiful.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much! 😊
LikeLike
Love pictures of puppies. It never occurred to me that the older puppies might resent the new addition.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for sharing your thought!☺️
LikeLiked by 1 person
I wonder if this is how a grandparent feels upon the arrival of a grandchild. It is joyous, but does it make one feel their age when they see one so young? (I am not at the stage of life so I don’t know). 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
May be, I’m not sure. I’m also not reached to that stage, can guess.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
LikeLiked by 1 person