#TankaTuesday Weekly Poetry Challenge: #Poet’s Choice – My Room


My room
is neat and cool
where my soul gets attracted,
experienced all emotions
right here.

With her clean handkerchief
she gently wiped his face
trust tells me to embrace
his narrow path.

This print
strengthens my faith
in all the storms of life
whenever feel low and lonely
in life.

This post is part of Colleen’s Syllabic Challenge

⭐I tried combining two forms: for example, I wrote a Cinquain followed by an Abhanga and finished with another Cinquain.

This is my first try. Let me know, please.

Thank you for reading.

Stay Blessed!


36 thoughts on “#TankaTuesday Weekly Poetry Challenge: #Poet’s Choice – My Room

  1. If you had not mentioned that it was your first try I would not have even guessed πŸ˜‚. The way you adapted your thoughts so beautifully to these concepts, was super; it was like the perfect match πŸ’™πŸ™.

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      1. Aww you are welcome jane πŸ’•πŸ’•. I love stopping by and seeing your excellent poems and writing.

        This is also the first time I am hearing about Cinquain and Abhanga, so iIalso learned something new in exchange haha.

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      2. It’s my pleasure β˜ΊοΈπŸ’•.

        That’s the terrific thing about WordPress and meeting marvelous people; you never know what interesting things you are going to learn next πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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      3. Your expression is beautiful and makes me very happy πŸ˜πŸ’˜πŸ’˜. It was great speaking with you and I wish for you to have a lovely day ☺️☺️

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