Once passing by the prison
Thought came to my mind
Why such a big gate to this building?
and why is this compound wall so high?
I asked the reason
No one told me as, I was child!
I arrived here
Inside this big gate
Why there is no connection with the outside world?
and why outside world takes us as criminals?
I understood everything here
But now it’s too late!
To make easy money
We kidnapped our friend
Why, I didn’t listen to my parents?
and why parents didn’t keep an eye on my friends?
Or else I would’ve not done kidnapping and robbery
In a company of bad friends!
Understood this is a dark life
So, completed further education
Why people don’t accept criminals, when they try to live good life?
and why criminals don’t get a chance to become a good person?
So, to start a good life
I want to wipe the stain!
©️ janeaguiar
Pic. Credit:Only In Your State
Written in response to: Reena’s xploration Challenge
Thank you for reading.
Stay Blessed!
It’s never late to start fresh…
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Yes, only we have to put one step forward….. thank you for resonating with me!
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Stay strong…
& Go ahead… many blessings are waiting for you. 💐
You are welcome
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Thank you for reading and enjoying!♥️
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You are welcome
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God bless you my friend
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Thank you!
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Thank you, God bless you too!😊
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🥰🥰
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☺️
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Very moving poem Jane.
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Thank you so much,Sadje 🥀
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You’re most welcome
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💜
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This is for juvenile delinquents, the ones who can turn around. Describes their misery beautifully.
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I’m glad that I penned it nicely and you liked it… thank you so much, Reena!
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I don’t see a Reblog button your page.
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Yes, reblog button is gone. May be because of Copyright. I’ll let you know tomorrow..ok
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Only round up is possible, Reena! Thank you 😊
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Where there is a will there is a way
Adolescence is a very delicate stage in ones life , guidance and counselling may help, because they actually don’t know the magnitude of the problem they might get into
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Thank you so much for resonating with me so nicely. Love you!
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stain red page
ages old
coward and bold
on a dare
i might even care beyond what is written there
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Great!😊
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We have had a few people on home detention in our neighbourhood and I’ve never had an issue with them. It’s about respect. Maybe they made a mistake, but doesn’t everyone?
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Yes, they didn’t get proper guidance at the right time…. thank you for sharing your views!😊
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A sad truth.
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Yeah!
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It’s definitely a conundrum. A deeply sad and complex one.
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Yes, but it’s a fact… thank you!
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Lovely, Jane. The opening to possibility is always there, if we can reach outside of ourselves just a little we can access it. And, then, it gets easier to access each time we reach. ❤️
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Yes, exactly…. thank you so much,Jeff!♥️
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This poem is touching, one bad company can indeed ruin a life. I wish you well my dear and may all blessings and happiness you deserve be with you ❣️
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Thank you for reading my poem and understanding their grief. God bless you too ❣️
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You’re most welcome! ❣️
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💖
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Nice post.
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Thanks a lot!
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It is hard to start a new chapter and you have portrayed it so well
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Glad to agree with me and Thank you for nice comment!
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Thanks, Reena!
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Thanks 😊
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I loved the poem, jane
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Thank you so much, Maria 😊
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Hi I love the poem!!!
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Yes, I will visit 😊
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