Crawls Around #ReverseEtheree

Posted on by Jane Aguiar

Like a lover crawls around his girlfriend
the butterfly crawls on the flowers
they try to seduce each other
the joy of satisfaction
experience of love
in togetherness
the nectar sucked
both of them
enjoyed
fun

©️ janeaguiar

Written in response to: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2021/11/16/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-252-photoprompt/

⭐I tried Reverse Etheree for the first time. Please, let me know about it.🙏

Thank you for reading.

Stay Blessed!

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58 thoughts on “Crawls Around #ReverseEtheree”

  2. Jane, I think this is a wonderful reverse etheree. I like the way you compared the butterfly’s relationship with the flower to two lovers. That is seeing with your third eye. Making comparisons like this (metaphors) are what makes for great poetry. Well done, Jane. ❤

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  17. Every time I see a butterfly flying towards a flower, I’ll assume the butterfly is planning on how to seduce the flower. (From today)
    What if the flower says “no”
    Okay, I’m done overthinking.

    Great work Jane💙

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    1. This is a metaphor because the butterfly sucks the nectar of flowers.So I compared it with the relation of couple. (The life cycle of nature,Derrick💕 Thank you so much,Dear!☺️

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