A brown
wooden
house in nature’s heaven
on a lake near mountain
under
blue sky
is set
A big
shadow
falls on the wooden house
as if Satan has come
to steal
during
the day
The birth
of child
born by surrogacy,
legal identity
of child’s
mother
stolen
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What a powerful statement. It works so well against the tranquility of the image
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Thank you soooo much, Deb!♥️
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A powerful piece, Jane! I agree with, Deb, that your words work so well with the tranquil scene.
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Thank you so much, Eugenia!❣️
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job n jonah
sahib
now let s endear
ourselves and read
the book of daniel
proceed sister azariah!
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Thank you so much, John!☺️
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Wow! Very affecting Jane. The mystery in your poem is intriguing. Thanks for joining in.
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I’m glad you liked my poem and found it penetrating. Thank you so much, Sadje!❣️
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You’re most welcome
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Yes. Surrogacy is changing the nature and definition of motherhood. I wish it can be done in labs rather than use a woman’s body as a production machine to sell goods.
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Yes, I agree Reena. I don’t like that method of giving birth.. Thank you!😊
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Legal identity ….by Jane Aguiar
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Thanks, Reena!
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Powerful! Liked your take. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Kitty!
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Interesting, powerful.
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Thank you so much,Indira!
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Welcome, dear.
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💕👍🏻
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I agree with everyone. Wow! What an awesome poem, and take, Jane. ❤️
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Thank you, Jeff! It means something great for me.♥️👍🏻
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You’re most welcome, Jane. Always! ❤️☺️
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♥️☺️
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Very moving for the spirit, mind and soul
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I’m happy you appreciate me. Thank you so much 😊
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You are cool people and very creative and enlightening
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Thank you so much 😊
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I love the shape of your poem, Jane and the contrast between the words and the image. It all works so well!
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Surrogacy is more likely to be in a secluded place like this. To hide the real identity these places are chosen. so I mentioned it in my poem. Thank you so much, Chris
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Thanks Reena ❣️
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Aww. Tremendous. 😘
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Thank you so much, Selma ♥️😘
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Thanks 😊
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Thank you, Sadje ❣️
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Nice take on the poem Jane.. love it 👏👏
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Thank you so much dear Cindy ❤️
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so welcome dear Jane!💖
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You are a good writer, keep writing
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Thank you so much!
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anytime ❤️
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