He looked
even more charming
as the breeze
was playing on his face
and with his hair.
I envied the wind,
so I leaned
a little closer to him
as I wanted
to put my hand
in his hair
and caress him lovingly.
I moved
closer to him,
my hand unknowingly
fell on his wrist
and I was struck
by the 420 voltz,
and realised that
I had fallen
in love with him.
Now, before I die,
I want to open
my heart to him
and shower
love on him
from the bottom
of my heart.
Yeah,I understand,
how love blossoms
in the moonlight
as well as
‘Life is a beautiful gift
and should be enjoyed’
completely.
©️ Jane Aguiar
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Stay Blessed 💞
Beautiful!!❤
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Thank you dear ☺️
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My pleasure!💕
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wow, this is very exciting, what a lucky guy…😊
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Thank you for such a sweet compliment dear ❤️
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anytime 😊
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Welcome dear ❤️
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Beautiful poem Jane! Moonlight is very conducive to falling in love, specially if someone is with you whom you already admire. Thanks for joining in with this lovely poem.
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Yeah, you are absolutely right dear Sadje. Thank you for resonating and appreciating❤️
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My pleasure Jane.
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Thank you Sadje!
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Both the poems are incredible Jane! 😍
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Thank you so much dear Maria🥰
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Oh you’re most welcome 🥰
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“struck
by the 420 voltz,” I’m assuming (and you know we mustn’t assume things) but I’m assuming this is like watts. You were struck by that many watts. haha. like lightning on a moonlight night.
Another point, those matching wrist watches were hard to miss. Young love, huh. But I love any poem that blooms under the moon light. Lovely, Jane. Keep going.
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Thank you so much for lovely comment and compliment dear Selma ❤️ xoxo
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What beautiful poems, Jane! 💞 Thank you for joining in.
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Thanks you so much dear 🥰❤️
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Ah the eternal flame of love 🙂
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Thanks a lot ☺️
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A beautiful poem, Jane! Moonlight actually works as a catalyst for love 😊💖
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Yes, it’s true.. Thank you for resonating with me,KK😊💕
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It’s my pleasure 💖
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I feel it dripping in my veins, the showers of your love…. I really like this piece Jane 😍
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Thank you for going deep into the poem and enjoying it dear Dennis ❤️
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Aww.. How sweet, that 420 volts I do get what you mean. Such a sweet and lovely poem dear Jane. 💖💖💖💖
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I’m glad you enjoyed my poem..Thank you so much dear Daphny ❤️
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You’re most welcome dear! 💖
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My pleasure dear ❤️
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Wow, Jane! This is so beautifully done! 💖
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Thank you sooo much dear Poonam ❤️🥰
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My pleasure, dear. 🥰
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What a great read. I love it in every way. Keep up the good work. This is poetry at its peak
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Thank you sooo much for inspiring and enjoying my poem, dear Lamittan❤️
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You’re most welcome, Jane my friend. ❤
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My pleasure dear Lamittan ❤️
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💕🌼🌼💕❤
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Thank you so much for sharing 😊
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Ah this is so so beautiful to read, really enjoyed your words and the feelings.
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Thank you so much! I’m glad that you enjoyed my poem, dear Pragalbha! ❤️
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You are very welcome my friend 🙂
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My pleasure dear 🌹
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A wonderful love poem, Jane!💖
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Thank you so much dear Chris!💕
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Brilliantly penned❣️
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Thank you so much! Sorry dear. It was in the spam❣️
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Okay, you are most welcome ❤️
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My pleasure dear ❤️
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These lines in particular are simply amazing, Jane.
❤
David
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I’m glad you liked it. Thank you sooo much! I truly appreciate this, dear David ❤️
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Very beautiful, Jane!
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Thank you,Dawn!
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A joy to read, simply delightful.
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Thank you so much,Keith!
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Great poem! Thank you for sharing 👌
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Thank you!
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A gorgeous poem, dear Jane. I love every line. ❤️
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Thank you sooo much for loving each line of my poem, dear Jeff!❤️🥰
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You’re most welcome, dear Jane! ❤️ It’s always such a pleasure to read you. 🥰
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It’s my pleasure, dear Jeff! Thanks once again 🥰❤️
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Lovely and beautiful poem… liked it.
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Thank you sooo much,Ashish!
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Struck
by the 420 volts 🤩 impressive
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Thank you so much,Jorine!
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Anytime,Jane
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Wow this such a beautiful poem! I hope one day I can feel this way!
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Thank you!
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Thank you so much, Sadje!
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Lovely, love this line – ‘Life is a beautiful gift
and should be enjoyed’
KL ❤
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Thank you so much dear KL❤️
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Nice article 👍
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Thanks a lot!
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That’s beautiful.
C. Perry
HotelBastard
Montreal
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Thank you!
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Thank you for sharing 😊
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How lovely !! 🥰🥰
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Thank you dear Raksha!❤️🥰
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My pleasure 😊
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Lovely. ❤️
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Thank you!
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Thank you for sharing 😊
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Beautiful romance
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Thank you very much,Jude!
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Awesome thoughts reflected in your poem.
Regards 🙏😊
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Thank you so much, dear Arun!😊
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You are always welcome 😊🙏
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Indeed life is a beautiful gift.
Must be enjoyed. Life is another name of Joy. Life is really blissful, but it has to be revealed.
Your lines are very warm.
Thank you so much for sharing this.
Namaste 🙏
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Good! Thank you for resonating with me, dear Arun!
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My pleasure.🙏☺️
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