The glass of wine
in your hand
is more fortunate.
When you taste wine
that glass touches
your lips then,
why do I feel like you are far away from me?
I was invited
to dance and dine then,
how did you give time to wine without dancing with me?
Wine is sweet bitter
than me then,
How do you crave wine without the magic of my love?
The pain
was intense,
but I found hope in it.
At least you met me then,
where our dreams scattered?
We missed their track.
©️ Jane Aguiar
Written in response to:What-Do-You-See by Sadje
Thank you for reading.
Stay Blessed!💞
I’ve always been fascinated by a tragic love story and I loved your take on it, it is stunning dear Jane. ❤️
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Glad you liked it. Thanks for echoing me, dear Daphny!❤️
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You’re most welcome dear! ❤️
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Beautiful verses and what a dilemma between wine and love. Kind regards.
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Thank you for appreciation!
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Such a wonderfully crafted poem, dear Jane. Wine and love at crossroads. 💕💚💕
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Glad you liked it. Thanks, dear Lamittan!🙂
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Sure. You’re most welcome, Jane 🤗
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Thank you!
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A tragic love story but so beautifully written!
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Thank you so much, dear Pooja!
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A lovely poem, dear Jane. Painful, with some hope mixed in too. Loved it. ❤️
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We live in hope. That is why we are alive. Thanks, dear Jeff! ❤️
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Indeed, and agreed. You’re welcome, Jane. Always! ❤️
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This is gorgeous, Jane, in both imagery and emotion. Your gift is amazing! 🙂
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Thanks a lot for this lovely comment, dear Mike! 🙂
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A beautiful poem Jane. A contrast or a rivalry between wine and love. Thanks for joining in
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Glad you liked it. Thank you for such a beautiful comment, dear Sadje!❣️
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You’re welcome my friend.
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Thank you so much, dear Sadje! ♥️
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Terrific, exciting, sad 🤗
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Thank you so much!
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imbibe and perhaps thrive
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Thank you so much, dear John! ❤️
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yo so juice and coffee. laundry day with pope st son tom. oh oh rules on everything the oldest thirty year old ever.
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Thank you once again,dear John! This might be your new poem. I’ll visit.👍🏻
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So lovely photo and inspiring poem to read 🌷🙏♥️👍🏻😊
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Thank you so much, dear Thattamma! ❤️
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Most welcome dear 🌷🙏♥️🌷
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🙂
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Very nice
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Thank you!
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Nice contrast, Jane. Beautifully imagery. ❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Poonam!❤️
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Wow this was very beautiful Jane, how you weaved together the picture, the painful distance felt, the good feeling settled for with the proximity and the hopes for the better.
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Thank you so much for the compliment, dear Pragalbha! We always live in the hope of tomorrow so I made the end positive because I wanted to show her understanding.💞
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You are very welcome, very well done!
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It’s my pleasure, dear Pragalbha! ❤️
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Amazing writing, thank you for sharing 😁
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Welcome, dear Josh!😊
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Thank you so much for sharing! 😊
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Thank you for sharing,my friend!
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a poetic treat…dealing with distance and resting in a future hope!
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Thank you so much!
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An evocative write, Jane!
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Thank you so much, Roshini!
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Thank you!
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