Verdant Prosperity #haiku #tanka

Fresh vegetation
that’s unsophisticated
verdant naive life

A form of beryl
crystallizes in a mass
prismatic crystals
mislabeled as emerald
it’s a stone named smaragdus

©️ Jane Aguiar

Pic Credit: Google and Pinterest

I have presented two forms: haiku and tanka. The words Verdant and Emerald represent colour.

Written in response to:

Thank you for reading.

Stay Blessed! 💞


74 thoughts on “Verdant Prosperity #haiku #tanka

  1. Jane, these verses are brilliant! I love how you describe wild vegetation as “unsophisticated” and “naive.” It evokes so much personality. And I have to admit I would love to have a handful of those green stones! 😀 Wonderful poetry from a wonderful person. Well done! 🙂

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