I loved you
with all my heart
and soul
but maybe
I don’t know how to connect
and express my love.
It was
a real feeling of love,
not a betrayal
but a lie
and not intentional.
Believe me or not,
you are everywhere
in my conscious
and subconscious mind
and meditation.
I know
I have brought bitterness
into our lives
and once the relationship
is cracked
and repaired
the stain remains forever.
Now
the hurricane
is raging in my mind
because I believed that
you love me too
and our souls
are connected
to each other
but alas
I think I was wrong.
Disappointment
gripped me
so much that
this stage of life feels like
a boat sinking
into a pit of despair.
©️ Jane Aguiar
⭐When something like this happens, strange emotions take over the head and unwanted things happen.This phase comes at some point in everyone’s life. Cultivate your hobbies without giving up. Going out with friends and time is the best medicine for heartache.
Pic Credit: Pinterest
Written in response to:
the-saturday-symphony-26-in-between-the-lines by Jude Itakali
Thank you for reading.
Stay Blessed! 💞
Nice
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you!
LikeLike
Thank you!
LikeLike
Your poem conveys the sentiment beautifully. Phases of despair are unavoidable in any relationship. I agree with you – time and other things that are nourishing for ourselves are necessary.
LikeLiked by 4 people
Yes, my poetry is full of emotions. Going deeper, I remembered the days of depression. Everyone experiences these feelings on the way to life.Thank you so much dear Pragalbha. ❤️
LikeLiked by 2 people
Yes these phases and experiences are inescapable and relatable. You are very welcome dear Jane.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I agree, Pragalbha ❤️🤗
LikeLiked by 1 person
How sweet it is
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much!
LikeLike
You’ve expressed so much pain in this poem, dear Jane; and, you’ve done it beautifully. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for your beautiful comment, dear Jeff. Glad you felt the pain.❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re most welcome, dear Jane. Always. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
So touching poem and the lines inspiring 🌷🙏👍🏻thank you for sharing dear,lovely wishes 👏♥️💐
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much for finding my poem touching and inspiring. Best wishes to you too, dear Thattamma.❤️
LikeLike
Most welcome 🌷🙏❤️🌷
LikeLiked by 1 person
💞
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful and touching poem dear Jane. Thank’s for share.
Have a wonderful time!
Keep well.
Elvira
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for the beautiful comment, dear Elvira! Have a nice time ❤️
LikeLike
You are welcome, dear Jane. Have a wonderful time! 🙏🏻❤️😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤️❤️
LikeLike
🙏🏻❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love this! I felt this in the past so thank you for putting words to that experience of mine.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much,Weng!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Pain of betrayal and disappointment in love is hard to bear. So well written Jane
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much for resonating with me, dear Sadje!❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Always my pleasure dear friend
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
🌷
LikeLiked by 1 person
That is indeed a great remedy for heartbreak, the intricacies of which you explored in this poem. A great submission for the prompt; rich in relatability and emotion. Thanks for joining in Jane.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much for such a beautiful and heart touching comment, dear Jude. You made my morning happy ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
At your service 😇
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂👍🏻
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well written ,👌🏻
Beautiful ❤️
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much,Rabbia!❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful message Jane an congrats on 1,000 followers!
💖🌻🙏
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much my dear friend Cindy you are one of them. Another good news is my blog turns one year old today (March 18, 2022)❤️😘❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re so welcome Dear Jane!
Wow, that’s soooo awesome and what a milestone and affirmation in numbers met. Cheers to that and many more!! 💖💖👏👏
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you once again, dear Cindy ❤️ 🤗
LikeLiked by 1 person
it’s my pleasure! 💖💖
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
💖
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for sharing my friend 🙂
LikeLike
This is such a beautifully expressed poem dear Jane, guess we all have that one story to tell. ❤️
LikeLiked by 2 people
Yes my friend, we all go through and experience this stage of life. Thanks my friend Daphny for echoing.❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re most welcome dear, it is a pleasure. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
but alas
I think I was wrong
sometimes our emotions seem so complicated but in the end they are as simple as that simple line – this is a beautiful poem, thank you.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks a lot my dear friend Maria for sharing your thoughts ❤️
LikeLike
The sense of deep hurt is palpable in this poem. It’s a connection I’ve made frequently in my own poetry–the depths of pain and despair. Although these emotions are hard to bear, you present them so beautifully and skillfully. You’re a true poet who knows what it’s like to hurt, and how to turn that into gorgeous, contemplative verse. Much respect to you, Jane. 🙂
LikeLiked by 2 people
I’m glad that you like all poems of mine and appreciate too. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, dear Mike 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you!
LikeLike
Kindness wisdom ✨
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike
Thank you for sharing!
LikeLike
Thank you!
LikeLike
Full of emotions, Jane! The pain beautifully expressed. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for appreciation, dear Poonam ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure, dear Jane. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for sharing 🙂
LikeLike
INSHA ALLAH Beautiful lines with a wonderful touch of joy and peace
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much!
LikeLike
https://dachshundscatsforrehoming.wordpress.com/2022/03/17/dachshunds-puppies/
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Absolutely beautiful! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much!
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are welcome!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Nice one
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike
This is very nice. Simple and authentic
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Alicia!
LikeLike
Nice lines… 👌👌🥰👌👌
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful words! Thanks for sharing! If you care to read some of mine 👇
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! I’ll visit, you follow me.
LikeLike
Thank you for sharing 😊
LikeLike
Beautifully expressed!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Yamini!
LikeLike
Thank you for sharing!
LikeLike
Lovely poem.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much,Yam!
LikeLike
mine pleasure dear
LikeLiked by 1 person
💖
LikeLike
Thank you for sharing!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike
Great post😢
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you,Shivi !🙂
LikeLike
So much pain, beauty, recognition, just emotion… Brilliant!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much,Louis!
LikeLike
WOW, this is awesome 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you my friend Dennis and welcome to my blog 💙
LikeLike
Most Welcome 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oooh, so poignant and wonderfully crafted. I love this. It’s sad to feel jilted in a relationship 😞
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes, I know. I have had this experience. 😁 Thank you for wonderful comment, dear Lamittan! 🙂
LikeLike
Indeed. Feel welcome in the best way possible, dear Jane. ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, dear Lamittan ❤️
LikeLike
Feel most welcome, Jane. 💖 ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤️❤️
LikeLike
Matters of heart have always been a loamy terrain for poems. Beautiful 👌🏾
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much!
LikeLike
Reblogged this on Purple Pennies.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much for sharing! 😊
LikeLike
Thank you sooo much, Jude!
LikeLike
Thank you for sharing my friend 🙂
LikeLike
wow so beautiful
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, dear Ishita !
LikeLike
Beautiful expression of love
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Sunith!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well Written .. love it… !!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Seema!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Interesting
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Grace!
LikeLike