Let’s go to a lonely
and cold place
faraway
in the woods,
where there will be
no sorrow, no tears,
only love
and affection.
Where a layer
of melted ice
can be seen
on the ground.
As the air warms up
and the trees begin to bloom,
spring arrives.
A rough track
with a wooden fence
on both sides
will take us to a cottage
in the woods,
where we will
witness our love.
Revolt in Russia
peasants boycott ancient dance
revival of spring
©️ Jane Aguiar
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Thank you for reading.
Stay Blessed! 💞
Wow! Amazing poem! Thank’s for share, dear Jane.
Have a wonderful time!
Elvira
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Welcome, dear Elvira!
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It’s a pleassure, dear Jane!
Great weekend!
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Have a nice weekend!
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Thank’s, You as well 😊
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alone man
what else can i say
tomorrow today
alone with the rebel Jesus
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God might have made your partner. At the right time she’ll enter in your life,John. Thank you ☺️
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most kind read remember st paul said and bless your boots upon my single soul. ty!
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My pleasure, dear John!
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dear john is a rather an anathema of an expression would you not concur>??
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Listen,you are a God’s gift(John) to your parents. Take care. God bless 🙂
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to their posterity of course.
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I love how such beautiful hope, dreams and love is alive in your poem.
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Thank you so much for the beautiful comment, dear Pragalbha.
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this is a beautiful piect Jane. I’m packing my bags now. 💖🌻🙏
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Come let’s go together🙂. So nice of you, it seems you enjoyed my poem. Thank you dearest Cindy ❤️❤️
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I’m ready when you are and you’re so welcome… I so did! 💖
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Thank you so much, dear Cindy! I enjoyed your fun❤️
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Both of your poems are beautiful, Jane! 🙂
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Thank you so much dear Yvette. 🙂
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Beautiful all, dear Jane. Love this. ❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Jeff ❤️
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You’re most welcome, dear Jane. Always. ❤️
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❤️❤️
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Excellent use of all the prompts Jane. Love this poem. Thanks for joining in
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You are always welcome my friend Sadje ❤️
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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❤️
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❤️❤️❤️
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🙂
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You painted a lovely scene with your words Jane, and a beautiful take on all prompts! Thank you for joining in.
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Thank you so very much, dear Eugenia ❤️
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My pleasure, Jane. 😊
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Aww.. Such a delight to read dear Jane, you make me want to go there myself. Simply stunning. ❤️❤️❤️
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Glad you like my poem and want to go there. 🙂Thank you very much, dear Daphny❤️❤️❤️
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You’re most welcome dear Jane! 😊💖
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❤️❤️
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Lovely this vivid writing!
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Thank you so much,Jaya!
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Lovely poem 💖
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Thank you!
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Welcome 😊
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This is wonderful Jane. Well done. ❤
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Thank you so much, dear Colleen. ❤️
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You’re welcome, Jane. ❤
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Thank you, dear Sadje!
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Thank you so much, dear Colleen!❤️
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Beautifully written, Jane. So peaceful 🙂
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Thank you so much for appreciation, dear Chris.🙂
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Both poems are beautifully written.
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Thank you so very much!
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This is beautiful, Jane!
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Thanks a lot, dear Dawn!
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Such a lovely fantasy, Jane!
❤
David
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Thank you so very much, David ❤️
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Thank you for sharing! 🙂
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Tremendously articulated.
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Thank you so much!
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You are very welcome.
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🙂
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😍
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🥰
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💖❤❤️💖
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Wonderful response to the prompt. I love the feeling carried in this.
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I liked that photo so much that I thought I was going there. Thank you so much for giving your precious time. 😃
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Yes, it’s such a wonderful pic indeed. It accompanies this great poem well. 💖
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Yes,it is. Thank you so much, dear Lamittan ❤️
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Welcome more and more. Always. ❤
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❤️❤️
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