He and she decided
to get out of their stressful life
and move into their own ancestral home.
She had a few doubts in her mind
so her mind was shaking.
She was going to re-enter
the house she had entered
for the first time after marriage.
She had many good and bad thoughts.
At last the day dawned,
they reached their ancestral home.
When she saw the steps of the house,
She realised that the house needs people
She was frightened
to see those steps
because she had completely forgotten
that they were not slanting
and began to think,”How can I climb so many steps in the last phase of my life?”
He already knew
what was going on in her mind
and what she can think
so he brought a vase of red tulip flowers
from the dicky car
and kept it on the first step.
She was thinking, Why? What is the purpose of this vase?
He recognized her gestures
and thoughts without saying a word.
He had brought
as many red tulips as there were steps.
He took all those red tulips
and her hand and promised her.
“In every step of my life,
in happiness and in sorrow,
in pain and in goodness,
I promise to love, support
and treat you with respect.”
And they lived happily ever after.
©️ Jane Aguiar
Pic Credit: Pinterest
Written in response to: What Do You See by Sadje
Thank you for reading.
Stay Blessed! 💞
So beautiful poem! Thank’s for share, Jane.
Nice weekend.
Elvira
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You’re welcome my friend ☺️ you too have nice weekend.
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Thanks you! too my friend! ☺️
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I ♥️ this so much….it reads like a Nicholas Sparks novel
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Thank you so much, dear! I didn’t read this novel. Glad you like it 🙂
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What a beautiful story of love and trust. Thanks Jane for joining in.
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Always my pleasure , dear Sadje ❤️
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🌺💖
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Such a lovely verse, Jane! ❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Poonam! Glad you like it ❤️
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My pleasure, dear. ❤️
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❤️❤️
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oh I always love a happy ending.. so beautiful Jane! 💖💖
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Thank you so much, dear Cindy! 💖💖
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you’re so welcome my friend! 💖💖
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Aww.. This is such a beautiful poem dear Jane, the words are overflowing with love. ❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks, dear Daphny. I’m glad you think so.❤️❤️❤️
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You’re most welcome, dear! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks a lot, dear Sadje!
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Thank you, dear Sadje! A beautiful poetry❤️
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Hola
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Hi
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Amazing.
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Thank you!
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Jane this is a wonderful piece, my friend. I love this lucky twist at the end. It’s a beautiful one and a wonderful response to the prompt. 👏💖
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Thank you so much my dear friend Lamittan! Glad you like it. ❤️ How are you my friend?
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Sure i did. I did. I’ve just recovered from sickness and I’m glad to be back. I’ve been slightly under the weather in the past few days. How about you, how’re you?
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I’m fine, thanks. I’m happy to see you here. The climate is changing and these virus variants are out. Take care of your health. Bless you, my friend!
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Thanks a lot, my dear friend. You’re right. I will take good care. Stay safe too. 💖
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You are welcome, my dear friend. 💖
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🙏❤❤🙏
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Thank you for sharing my friend 🙂
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Absolutely beautiful, dear Jane! ❤️
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Thanks, dear Jeff ! ❤️
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Most welcome, dear Jane! Always. ❤️
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❤️❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Jude! 💖
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So many tender sentiments of love in this poem! Beautiful in every way, Jane. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Mike! I’m glad you thought so. Thanks again for the nice comment.🙂
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Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Beautiful. Good job.
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Thank you,Benjamin!
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You are welcome, Jane.
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Thank you for sharing! ☺️
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