
Climate change, suddenly it started to rain.
A strong wind blew.
The trees were uprooted
and I got stuck on my way home.
I heard your sweet voice,
you were looking for me by phone.
I could not respond.
Love pumped in the blood
i plunged deep into it
heart’s desire doubled
a machine message failed but
souls connected with sure vibes
Β©οΈ Jane Aguiar
Written in response to:
Colleen’s Specific Form Tankaprose
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Stay Blessed! π
Beautiful, passionate poem Jane. Thanks for joining in
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That’s my pleasure, dear Sadje β€οΈ
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Nicely done Jane! π
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Thank you so much, dear Cindy! π
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Always a pleasure Jane! ππ
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I feel your heart in this. Beautiful heart. XoXo
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Thank you, dear Selma π xoxo.
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That was beautiful, Jane! π
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Thanks a lot, dear Yvette!πβ€οΈ
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A marvelous twist… i love it, Jane. β€
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Thank you so much, dear Lamittan! β€οΈ
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Most welcome, dear Jane. π
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Aww.. Such a sweet amidst the storm dear Jane β€οΈ
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Thank you, dear Daphny! Glad you like it. β€οΈ
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You’re most welcome dear π
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Beautiful.
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Thank you, dear Indira!
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Welcome, dear.
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You are most welcome, dear Jane.
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Thank you,Laiba!
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Wonderful write, Jane! β€οΈ
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Thank you so much, Poonam! β€οΈ
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How lovely this is, dear Jane. Beautiful! β€οΈ
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Thanks a lot, dear Jeff! β€οΈ
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Youβre welcome, dear Jane! Always. β€οΈ
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So understanding wooΓ²w more grace dear
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful lines
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Thank you so much!
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Lovely, Jane ππ
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Thank you, dear Harmony ππ
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This is so lovely, Jane. Well done. β€
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Thank you so much, dear Colleen! Glad you like it. β€οΈ
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Thank you so much, Sadje!
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Thank you for sharing,my friend π
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Holy shamoley, Jane – that tanka is terrific!
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David
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Holy shamoley, David! Thanks a lot. β€οΈ
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