
When you are not around,
I talk to you.
Looking at you in the mirror
of imagination,
I smile at you.
Communicating with you
without words,
I get lost in you,
so sometimes
words fall short.
Dusk reminds me of you
and the surreal image of yours
comes in front of me
and I think
I am very close to you
©️ Jane Aguiar
Pic Credit: Pinterest
Written in response to: Eugi’s Weekly Prompt
Thank you for reading.
Stay Blessed! 💞
A beautifully written and touching poem, Jane. Excellent take and combining of both prompts. Thank you for joining in.
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Thank you so much for appreciation! Glad you like it, dear Eugenia.❤️
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My pleasure, Jane.
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❤️❤️
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So impactful your poem is. Full of emotional approach
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Thank you so much, dear Yam! Nice to meet you friend. Glad you felt emotional too. ❤️
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Mine pleasure dear. Likewise.
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Keep visiting, friend 🙂 stay safe.
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Sure
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😊
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Reblogged this on BERZERIEUS: Decentralized Marketplace.
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Thank you for sharing, my friend 🙂
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Anytime
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A beautiful poem Jane. Reminds me of a famous couplet of Momin( an Urdu poet); Tum mere paas hote ho goya , Jab koi doosra nahi hota”
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Thank you very much Sadje. Wow! this has become like a couplet🤔. I heard his name for the first time. I want to read his poems in future.❤️
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There are versions available in Roman Urdu which will be easier to read. It’s said that Ghalib offered to trade his whole‘Dewan’ if Momin would give him this couplet.
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I heard about Ghalib. This name is familiar, so nice. Thank you for information. Good night, Sadje. ♥️
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You’re welcome Jane. I don’t know if you can read Urdu as it’s a difficult language to master but some of the poetry is amazing
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I can’t read and understand Urdu but can use translator. Yes i know. Thanks again, dear! ♥️
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You’re welcome
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❤️❤️
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💜
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So beautiful poem.
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Thanks a lot! 😊
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Such a glamorous piece, Jane. Fills the heart with wonderful longing of moments past 💖 ❤
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Thanks, Lamittan! Glad you like it.❤️🙂
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This is so beautiful, Jane 💕🙂
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Thanks a lot, dear Harmony! 💕🙂
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This poem reminds many memories of my life. Great lines 💕
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Thank you so much! Glad to read my poem related to you. 💕
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Welcome Jane💕
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💕
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Beautiful poem! Jane.
Great week!
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Thank you, Elvira!
Have a beautiful week.🙂
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You’re welcome,Jane!
Beautiful week too! 🙂
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💖💖
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🙏💛💖
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Beautiful poetry, Jane.
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Thank you so much, dear Chavi!
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Beautiful Jane! ❤
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Thank you,Filipa! ❤️
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Thank you so much for sharing 🙂
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So moving and lovely, Jane! ❤️
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Thank you so much, Poonam! ❤️
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Love this.. it brought back a flood of emotion for me.. very powerful!!
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful Creations and Blog!! That was well expressed! God, Bless You!!
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Thanks a lot for appresciation!
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you just got me thinking of the old memories
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Thank you so much for reading my poem and remembering the old days. Glad to read this.
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Truly beautiful, dear Jane! ❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Daphny! ❤️
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You’re most welcome dear! ❤️
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(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
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Awesome ma’am.
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Thank you!
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thankyou🤗
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Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Nice !!
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Thank you!
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A beautiful poem, dear Jane. I love it. ❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Jeff! ❤️
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Absolutely beautiful … love your way with words! 🤍✨
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Thank you so much! 💙
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You are very welcomed ✨🤍
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💖💖
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Thank you for sharing my friend! 🙂
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beautiful poetry.
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Thank you, Jude!
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A beautiful poem, Jane ❤️
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Thank you,Amaka! ❤️
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Wonderful poem.
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Thank you,Dr Prakash!
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Beautiful 😻
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Thank you,Saania!🥰
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