
Come, my darling,
and hold my hand in your hand.
Never let go of my hand,
so don’t dodge me.Come closer.
Come closer,
and let me find
my image in your eyes,
so don’t go away. Come, let’s look at each other.
Come, let’s look at each other,
and let me find
a little love for me,
so don’t ignore.Come, pay attention to me,
Come, pay attention to me,
and let me find
my future in you,
so don’t say a word. Come, surrender yourself to me,
Come, surrender yourself to me,
and let me find
some similarities between us,
so don’t be sad. Come, sorrow always brings happiness,
Come, sorrow always brings happiness,
and let me find
some happiness in you,
so let us live and let others live.
Β©οΈ Jane Aguiar
Written in response to:
https://wordeologist.wordpress.com/2022/05/21/the-saturday-symphony-28-may-edition-finding/
Thank you for reading.
Stay Blessed! π
I love this poem Jane. Beautifully crafted
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Thank you so much, dear Sadje! β€οΈ I was thinking about what to do and how to do it and heard the song ‘Perfect’ and decided to take this topic.π
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Youβre most welcome my friend
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such a thought
and i was never taught
how to have street knowledge
even high on the campus hill of the state college!
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Thank you so much, dear John! π
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So lovely poem π·πππ» True love expressed β₯οΈππ
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Thank you so much, dear Thattamma β€οΈ
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π·πβ₯οΈπ·so welcome dear friend ππ·
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Beautiful and lovely β€
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Thank you, dear Laiba! β€οΈ
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Welcome
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Love this poem.π
Nobita and Shizuka look so charming in that photo βΊοΈπ
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Thank you so much, dear Maya π
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Aw, this is such a sweet poem full of the yearning of young love. Beautifully written and emotive. Wonderful sentiments as always, Jane. π
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Thank you for beautiful comment and compliment, Mike π
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Love this poem
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
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Thank you so much,Jude!
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So much love and emotion here. Well penned ππ
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Thank you so much,Sir KK! Glad you liked it. π
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Always welcome π
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Thank you for sharing! π
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