I don’t like cloudy weather
Lost someone forever who was near
Gone away and completed a year
Greyish-black cloudy weather reminds me sad day
Grievous period want to leave far away
Through these greyish-black clouds God blesses with sun ray
To experience life well in many way
Accepted the departure of dear
Greyish-black colour made me cry in fear
I don’t like cloudy weather
©️ Jane Aguiar
Pic Credit: Get walls
⭐ It’s been a year since my mother passed away but I still feel close to her. My greyish-black dresses reminded me of her loss.
The structure of Symetrelle form is given here:Poetscollective.org
Written in response to:Colleen’s Syllabic Poetry
Thank you for reading.
Stay Blessed! 💞
Literature World 
Loosing someone you love is never easy, greyish days are one you wish never comes. I do know she’s always in your heart and she’s there looking at you from above, stay strong dear Jane. ❤️💞
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Thank you so much, for kind and touching words, dear Daphny! ❤️
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You’re most welcome, dear Jane! 💞
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Stay strong Jane but don’t ever forget to shed a tear…it helps. I believe our dearly departed are always with us.
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Thank you so much, dear Elaine! I’ll remember your lovely words 🙂
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Oh, Jane, your words evoke such loss and grief. Beautifully expressed. Hugs 💕🙂
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Thanks my dear Harmony. I feel that pain everyday, can’t forget that day.❤️ Hugs dear ❤️
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i understand if you were here you would like cloudy weather. discussed the significance of the bindy with my new banker one sudipta maity of calcutta now in slc ut usa fascinating
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Thank you so much, John!
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Y are writing my heart. July is a grey one for me as well. I lost my younger sistet to cancer a year ago this month end. I miss her everyday. May our poetry carry us through, Jane. 💜
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Thank you so much!
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I’m so sorry for your loss Jane. A parent’s loss is very hard and takes us years to come to terms with. A lovely poem.
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Yes, you are absolutely right. Thank you so much, dear Sadje!
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You’re always welcome Jane.
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So sorry for your loss Jane.. I’m sure she’s proud of you and is in a beautiful world.
This piece is so heartfelt… beautifully written 💕
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Thank you for kind and generous thought, dear Kirti 💕
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You’re always welcome Jane
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This is a very beautiful piece. I enjoyed the form so much I attempted one of my own. The repetition and the rhyme were so beautifully done especially because it is so personal . My condolences to your family may god bless
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Thank you so much!
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So sorry for the loss of your mother and those gray days.
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Thank you, my dear! Happy to see you here.🙂
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Deep emotional piece. I am so sorry for your loss, my friend🤍🙏🏾🕯
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Thank you so much for kind words, Jude!
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Jane, this is a hard form, and you mastered it with no problems! I’m sorry for the loss of your mother. Those gray days bring memories and feelings to the surface. Well done, my friend. ❤
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Thank you so much for your loving and kind words,dear Colleen! ❤️
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You’re always so welcome, Jane. ❤
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This is a beautiful tribute, Jane. Very touching…
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David
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Thank you so much, David! ❤️
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It’s so very difficult when we lose our moms, isn’t it? There’s no one in the world quite like them. God bless. 🌹
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Yes, it’s absolutely right. Thank you so very much, dear Nancy! God bless you too!
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I feel your heartache through your poem, Jane. Sending comforting hugs your way. 🙂
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Thank you so very much for hugs, Yvette! 🙂
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It’s unfortunate to lose mom. I find it relatable!
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Thank you so much for relating with me,Sir KK 💖
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Indeed a great post❤
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Thank you so much, Laiba ❤️
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Welcome❤
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