
You are as hot as I am
during the day, but at night
you are cold, below minus degrees
because you do not ignite
light like me, but still…
My dear Mona,
the enthusiastic lovers
of the earth swear an oath
of love before you
as if you were a goddess.
My dear Indu,
they fall in love with each other
in your moonlight and compare
their lover to you.
My dear Luna,
men are as excited as a groom
in the presence of a lover
in your light.
My dear Chandra,
When the children are not asleep,
their mother sings your lullaby
and puts them to sleep.
©️ Jane Aguiar
Pic Credit: Wattpad
Written in response to:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/07/06/w3-prompt-10-weave-written-weekly/
Thank you for reading.
Stay Blessed! 💞
Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Thank you so much,Ami! I’m Jane 😊
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Yes. I went back to change my lovely autocorrect but couldn’t edit it. Apologies!!
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It’s ok. We can forget names. It’s a mistake not crime.❤️
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I had just written to Jaya. My autocorrect thought it was being proactive and changed Jane to Jaya (unhelpfully). My fault for not noticing until after I pressed submit!! LOL
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i melt in this high desert heat Jane~!
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Transform again or you might remain melted. Thank you,John!
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six miles this week early riser.
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Thank you, John!
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Beautifully done! 💕
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Thank you, dear! 💕
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😊
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Beautiful poem Jane. So many beautiful names for the moon.
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Thanks a lot, dear Sadje! Glad you liked it my friend.
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You’re most welcome
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❤️❤️
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Beautiful poem about the moon I’m not sure about the different names for the moon? I’d not heard them before. It would be nice to read an anthology of poems on the moon.
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Thanks so very much! Do a Google search, you will find them.
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Goodness, this is wonderful. ^_^
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Thank you (・∀・)
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Hehe. Of course!
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❤️❤️
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This is beautiful, Jane! You bring out the magic of the moon.
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Thank you very much, dear Eugenia!
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My pleasure, Jane!
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❤️❤️
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Such a delight to read dear Jane. ❤️
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Nice to hear from you. Thank you so very much, dear Daphny ❤️
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You’re most welcome, dear Jane! ❤️
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❤️❤️
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This is beautifully evocative, Jane!
❤
David
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Thank you so much, David ❤️
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Loved this characterization of the sun talking to the moon… Do I hear a hint of jealousy?
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Thank you so very much ,murisopsis!
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Lovely. Stay blessed.
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Thank you so much, dear Selma. Stay Blessed 💞 xoxo
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Beautiful and inspirational piece Jane .. brilliant ❤️
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Thanks a lot for beautiful comment, dear Kirti 💕
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You’re most welcome ❣️
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❤️❤️
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How wonderful to use the Indian synonyms for the moon, Jane! Wonderfully done. ❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Punam. Glad you liked it ❤️
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My pleasure, dear Jane. ❤️
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Thank you for sharing 🙂
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This was really good, can’t wait to see more of your work
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you for sharing ☺️
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Thank you for sharing 🙂
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hi, Jane ❤
I just wanna let you know that this week's W3 prompt, hosted by Steven S. Wallace, is now live:
Have a wonderful day,
David
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Thank you so much, David. I will participate. Have a nice day ❤️
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Beautiful 💓
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Thank you!
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So beautifully written Jane🙂😍💗
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Thank you so very much, Riddhi 💗
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Great pic and words. The moon is incredible, but the Creator even more so.
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Yes, absolutely true my friend. Thanks.
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Thank you for sharing 😊
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Thank you for sharing 🙂
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this was pretty!
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Thank you so much,Neeraj!
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