Cryptic…#tanka #haiku

Patient’s comma stage
eyes wide open, no response
dramatic visit
doctor calls the patient ‘maa’
soul returns the longest day

It’s a copse of trees
reflected mirror image
shines a cryptic light

©️ Jane Aguiar

Pic Credit:Dreamstime stock photos

Written in response to:

tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-themeprompt by Colleen

moon-washed-weekly-challenge-dramatic by Eugenia

what-do-you-see by Sadje

Thank you for reading!

Stay Blessed! πŸ’ž

35 thoughts on “Cryptic…#tanka #haiku

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s