An evening at the beach
Full of emotions beyond reach.
My heart missed you
Every beat reminded me of you.
The eyes captured the scene
To persuade, played in the water of saline.
Blue sky above, blue water at my feet
I can only miss you but can’t meet.
©️ Jane Aguiar
Pic Credit: The next trip
Written in response to:
w3-prompt-14-weave-written-weekly/
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Stay Blessed! 💞
Literature World 
Nostalgia is so well expressed
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Thank you so very much, Sadje ❤️
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You’re welcome
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❤️❤️
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yes, exactly… and beautifully conveyed…
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Indeed 👍🏼
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Loved it 😊
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Thank you, dear!❤️
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I love it!
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Thank you so much, dear!
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Your welcome Jane!
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Beautiful, dear Jane. ❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Jeff! Glad you visited my blog ❤️
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You’re most welcome, dear Jane. ❤️Always. Ah, for a time your blog was not showing up in my reader, it is now. 😁
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❤️❤️
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saline solutions
in the high desert
too many people
and wind blowing it over the top!
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Thank you so much, John !
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Beautifully expressed dear Jane. ❤️
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Thanks a lot, dear Daphny!
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You’re most welcome, dear Jane! ❤️
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❤️❤️
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Awwwww, breathtaking and nostalgic. Bravo!
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Thanks for such a beautiful comment,Joyce!
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You’re very welcome, Jane.
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Really felt that last line, “I can miss you but can’t meet.” Beautiful poem.
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Thank you so very much!
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Beach 💜💜💜💜
You are making me want to go today.
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Thank you my friend! 💜💜💜💜
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Great expressions of the heart ♥️ especially the lines….. .Blue sky above, blue water at my feet
I can miss you but can’t meet.
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Thank you soo much for beautiful comment, Dhirendra! ❤️
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My pleasure! Kindly find time to go through my latest posts at your convenience Pl 🌷🙏
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By evening I’ll visit your blog 🙂 ❤️👍🏻
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Take your time ,Jane 😂
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Profound and beautiful, Jane! ❤
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Thanks my friend,Aayushi!❤️ Glad you thought so.😊
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this was beautiful jane!
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Thank you so much!
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MY FAV LINES
• My heart missed you
Every beat reminded me of you
• Blue sky above, blue water at my feet
I can only miss you but I can’t meet
This one reminded of the Hindi song Galliyan
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Thank you so much! I don’t like any Hindi songs but I’ll check it out.
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Beautiful.. with sweet pic 💙
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Thank you so much! 💙
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Jane,
I just want to let you know that this week’s W3 is now live:
Much love,
David
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Thank you so much, David!
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Awesome.. please grace my space with ur presence and feedback my poetry at https://homemakersthehiddenforce.wordpress.com/2022/08/09/i-am-the-creation-they-warn-you-about/
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Thank you my friend 🙂
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❤️❤️
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Thank you!
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Nostalgia at its finest! It’s been ages since I have last went to the beach! Very well put!🧡😇
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Thank you so much!
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nice saying….besutiful….Blue sky above, blue water at my feet
I can only miss you but can’t meet.
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Thank you so very much,Vaneezay!
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Digging this big time
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Thank you!
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Hi, Jane!
I just want to let you know that this week’s W3 poetry prompt, hosted by Punam Sharma, is now live:
Enjoy 😀
~David
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Thanks for the invite! I am not feeling well but if I feel better tomorrow I will definitely write a poem.
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Oh, gosh! I hope you feel better soon❣️
In terms of the prompt, you can submit something until Sunday morning 🌄
Much love ❤️
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Thank you so much, David ❤️
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It’s actually funny that I’ve never had a romantic day at the beach. It’s always with friends.
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Very sad 🥺
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