
I had a strong desire
to build my nest myself
and to achieve the construction
I brought twig by twig
from my beak.
Shaped my nest.
My beautiful nest was
on the stump
of a small tree.
One day a snake smelled it
and approached the nest.
He was starving.
I screamed in horror.
The good man,
near whose house I had built the nest,
heard my cry
and took care of my nest
and helped me.
He placed my nest in his gallery.
Now I go there, it feels so safe.
One lesson learned
the stronger eats the weaker
it’s nature’s food chain
©️ Jane Aguiar
Written in response to:
moonwashed-challenge-ambitious by Eugenia
tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-286-themepromp
Thank you for reading.
Stay Blessed! 💞
I love that this story has a happy ending. Thanks Jane for joining in with this sweet story.
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Glad you liked it dear. Thank you so much!❤️
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You’re most welcome
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❤️
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How lovely, Jane. 💜
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Thank you so much, Colleen ❤️
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you might be a hunger games fan. i on the other hand am not.
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May be. Thank you so much,John!
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Awww, what a wonderful ending. Thank you for this uplifting read.
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Thanks a lot, dear Joyce!
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Of course, Jane!!!
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❤️❤️
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^_^
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Thank you, Sadje ❤️
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Oh, I am so glad everything turned out okay in the poem! 😀
❤
David
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My nest was saved by a good man so all is well, David.😃
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Thank you so much, Colleen! ❤️
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I’ve seen this happen so many times in our own backyard, and I hate it. But I love that the man rescued the nest and the bird. Wonderful poem!
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I’m glad that the poem has brightened your memories. Thank you so very much,Dawn!
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Ah, indeed nature is; and you’ve also given us a very wonderful example of kindness and generosity. Lovely, dear Jane. ❤️
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Glad you liked that. Thank you soo much for appreciation, dear Jeff ❤️
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Yes, nature is not too kind if we see in general. Thanks Jane. Beautiful story in the poem.
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Thank you so very much, Narayan!
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Hello
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Hi
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❤️👌
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Thank you,Isha❤️
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Beautiful!!!
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Thank you!
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Well scripted
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Thank you!
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Really enjoyed your take, Jane.
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Thank you so much,Jude!
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Your poem makes me cheerful! While you managed to build your nest, I am still trying to do the same … it’s time-consuming for me 🙂
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Hahaha😂 i like your comment. Thanks 🙂
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