
One day on a foggy
new moon morning
she felt a familiar soul
calling her
by singing a known song
and she got up and released
her husband’s silken embrace
and walked unconsciously
behind a figury soul
The figury soul was
very familiar to her
and so was the voice
She reached to the figury soul
as some power
was taking over her mind
and walked with the figury soul
until they reached the place
where they both breathed their last
in the last birth
Souls from previous lives
were eager to meet
in this life too
as if the relationship
from birth to birth
continued through the ages
Copyright ©️ 2022 Jane Aguiar
Written in response to:what-do-you-see-155 by Sadje
Thank you for reading!
Stay Blessed! 💞
👌
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Thank you!
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any moon is full
and the fuel
like a papal bull
gone blue
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Very nice, John! Thank you friend 🙂
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yw .
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😊
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This one was hauntingly beautiful dear Jane. ❤️❤️
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Hahaha…hauntingly beautiful?… thank you so much, dear Daphny ❤️❤️
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Haha… Got some kind of haunting vibe going on which I personally love, perhaps the fog? 😄 You’re welcome, dear Jane! ❤️
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Actually you are absolutely right. I think, I wrote a haunting poem for the first time, dear Daphny ❤️
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You should write more. 😁💗
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Thank you dear 💕
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You’re most welcome dear! ❤️
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❤️❤️
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love the vibe in poetry Jane💗
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Thank you soo much, dear Cindy. Glad you loved it.💖
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It’s a Pleasure Jane! ❤️
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❤️❤️
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So pretty and haunting. Nice one!
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Thank you for appreciation,Joyce!
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You deserve it, Jane!
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Thank you once again dear ❤️
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You’re very welcome.
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❤️❤️
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Beautifully written Jane. A magical story. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you so much, Sadje!
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You’re most welcome
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❤️❤️
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It is haunting to not be able to love who you want to love.
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Ooh it’s a story, Jude. Just enjoy 💖
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Love it!🥰
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Thank you 💖
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Beautifully written
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Thank you very much,Sahiti!😊
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A poetic story in a different texture. Love it, Jane !
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Thank you very much,KK 💖 Glad you liked it.
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Thank you for sharing 😊
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Beautiful.
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Thank you,Indira!
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Such a beautifully written poem 👏🏽
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Thanks very much, Pooja!😊
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My pleasure!
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Thank you, Sadje!
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Nice words
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Thank you so much!
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Hmm its cool 👍
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Thank you!
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Hauntingly awesome Jane… Love it
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much!
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Thanks for reblogging!😊
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Amazing poem, Jane! I love it!
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Thank you so very much, dear Dawn!
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Lovely poem, enjoyed reading every word… Thanks
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Thank you so much!
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Reblogged this on Poetry Works50.
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Thank you for reblogging 😊
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❤️💖
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