
where dawn meets the dusk
my arms outstretched for a hug
became straight line
Kir stretches out his arms to embrace Zhenya passionately

With the help of a dark spell, she forces him to love her again but she chants the wrong spell and stops the fountain, the flow of water and time.
the season’s image
reflection in calm water
like soul’s mirror image

He deceives her in love but she loves him deeply
After learning that she will be the mother of his child, she wants him back
She meets a Yogini and learns a dark spell interestingly
In the wedding ceremony of the lovers,
she recites, ‘I am yours and you are mine’
Thinks that her best friend and her groom are true lovers
She steps down and falls.
The groom helps her, though it disrupts their wedding
As she chants, her lover re-enters her life only to shower love like heavy rainfall
He is so engrossed in love that he is not even aware of the child
Loves only and does not allow to take care of the baby
Finally, bored and panicked, she becomes wild
Plans to kill him and an accident occurs
Even after he dies, his soul yearns
to become forever hers
Amo” I love you!
love deeply from head to toe
dark spell, drowns me in you
Copyright ©️2022 Jane Aguiar
Pic Credit: Dark spell
Written in response to:
tankatuesday-poetry-challenge-no-294-10-18-22-ekphrastic-photoprompt by Colleen
w3-prompt-25-weave-written-weekly by David
⭐” Amo” means boss. She becomes the boss as she rules his soul.
⭐⭐ I tried to write idyll haibun for #tankatuesday-syllabic-poetry (one prose and one haiku) according to the rule, the title should connect to the poem.
Thank you for reading!
Stay Blessed! 💞
Fantastic lit
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Thank you so much,maxperito! 😊
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Thank you for reblogging!💖
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This is a very interesting story/ poem Jane. A departure from your usual style. Thanks for joining in my friend
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Thanks for the nice, inspiring comment, Sadje. I think departure should be a classic and should stay in thoughts, minds and hearts forever 💞
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Very right. It’s when we step out of our comfort zone, we learn the most.
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Absolutely right ❤️❤️
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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❤️👍🏻❤️
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Yaa really true said Dear Sadje. It’s really true that her style is so unique. And by the way you can visit my blog page also and give me your reviews so that I can improve myself. 😊👍
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You select meaningful quotes that add beauty and meaning to your post. Keep going like this. Be successful in your goal,Yaksh☺️
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Actually I’m just trying to be better than myself only each day and help others.Thank you for your beautiful wishes Dear Jane. 😊🙏
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Most welcome, friend!😊
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😊🙏
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a vow i could not keep
is the reason we still weep
reap whatcha sow
you should always remember and know~
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Absolutely right my friend John. We reap what we sow. Thanks! 😊
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Jane, this is beautiful. I love it. ❤️
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Thank you soo much, dear Colleen! ❤️ Happy to get this remark. I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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Very lovely. 💜
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Thanks once again, dear! ❤️
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You’re so welcome. 💜
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❤️❤️
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Those pesky spells so often have a negative side effect. Really enjoyed your take on that image, Jane.
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yes my friend, dark magic is not good. What is not ours never comes to us. Thank you for relating with me.😊
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Well said. You’re welcome 🙂
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❤️❤️
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Well done! 👍
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Thank you so much, Suzette! 😊
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Wow, how haunting.
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Thank you so much,Pooja! ❤️
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You’re very welcome 😊
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❤️❤️
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Oh dark magic is not good Jane but your piece was awesome! ❣️
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Thank you so much for appreciation, dear Cindy! 💖 I’m glad you liked it ☺️
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Thank you for sharing! 😊
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Wow, very interesting story, thank you for sharing.
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Thanks a lot, Anita 😊
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Wow, Jane, that last line…
That is simply brilliant.
❤
David
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Thanks so much, David! I’m glad you liked that last line. It was a spell so I showed its overwhelming effect. ❤️
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Thank you for reblogging 😊
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Nice
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Thank you!
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Thanks so very much, Sadje! ❤️
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Thank you so much, Colleen!❤️
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Ok
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Ok
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I always love a good haibun. This is a captivating one.🌷
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Thanks for the lovely comment, Jude! 🌷
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My pleasure.
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Jane,
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by Sylvia Cognac, is now live:
Enjoy!
❤
David
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Thank you for invitation, David! ❤️
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❤ Jane ❤
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The seriously good and intoxicating story, I once fluctuate in bride night like a fantasy
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Thank you so much,Aana!
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Wow……nice post
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Thank you so much,Nijara!
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Wonderfully written🤩💕
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Thank you so much, Deeksha!💕
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hi, Jane ❤
I just want to let you know that this week's W3, hosted by the lovely Paula Light is now live:
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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👋 David,thanks so much! ❤️ I will definitely try to participate but can’t promise because I will be attending 3rd to 5th camp (scout and guide) and when I go, my health deteriorates.
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oh no 😦
why does your health deteriorate, Jane?
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I went on a trip to hyderabad with staff and family and we got cold and fever and now have to attend this camp with class 9th and 10th. I feel better but have to stay out again so I said…. Thanks for love and concern, David! ❤️
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oy vey… are you taking medicine?
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Yes, i feel better now but tomorrow again out for duty.😊
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Be careful…!
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Yeah,sure. Thank you once again ☺️
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Lovely and so overwhelming post Dear. It’s vibes are so positive and mind blowing Dear👌🤘
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Thank you so much for beautiful comment,Yaksh 😊 I’m glad you liked it 👍🏻🤘
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Wow
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Thank you!
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💖❤️
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