God Exists #senryu #tanka

desperate prayers
God is under pressure now
to show existence

water becomes ice
ice melts and becomes water
it’s reversible
water turns into the steam
steam turns back into water

silvery white silk
profuse feathers on the back
are you an angel?

Copyright ©️ 2022 Jane Aguiar

Pic credit: Media storehouse


Written in response to:

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Thank you for reading!

Stay Blessed! 💞


52 thoughts on “God Exists #senryu #tanka

      1. cannot have one without the other. why original sin. why begin with a former innocent exile. why is death not the end but a mortal fatal smile. get back to me jane. it is so deep i must slowly creep to the edge of eternity .

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