Climate change, suddenly it started to rain.
A strong wind blew.
The trees were uprooted
and I got stuck on my way home.
I heard your sweet voice,
you were looking for me by phone.
I could not respond.
Love pumped in the blood
i plunged deep into it
heart’s desire doubled
a machine message failed but
souls connected with sure vibes
©️ Jane Aguiar
Written in response to:
Colleen’s Specific Form Tankaprose
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My Syllabic Form🙂
1) Title is needed
2) Total 29 syllables
3) Pattern 3/5/3/9/9
4) The meaning should be felt after connecting the first two lines.
5) The third line should give meaning, without breaking the first two lines and losing their meaning.
6) The third line is not a pivot line
7) The meaning should be felt after connecting the last two lines.
8) The last two lines should not add any meaning to the third line as it is not the pivot line.
9) When all five lines are read, they must find meaning.
🌟 In (A, B, C) ” I” is the ninth letter so the pattern in descending order will be: I I C E C . This is the reason, I named this form as ICE form
Fell in love
it is not yet known
no regrets
the dream disappeared when I woke up
my love, the night changes me and you
©️ Jane Aguiar
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Orange
symbols sunshine
like a sunset image
everyone eat it as it is
citrus
but the extreme cold and covid
gives us a sore throat
it’s better to
take care
©️ Jane Aguiar
Pic Credit: Sunset
Written in response to:
Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday Weekly Poetry Challenge
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Respond
to God’s grace and
goodness with gratitude
of the previous year nurtured
by you
Joyous
festive mood of the festival
graciously acknowledges
sacrifices
with joy
©️ janeaguiar
Pic. Credit: Google image
Written in response to: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2021/11/23/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-253-themeprompt/
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Our lady visited
about two years later now
festive occasion
anger resentment forgot
grand celebration was held
©️ janeaguiar
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This is my 100th post and Luckily it’s “Our Lady” #Tanka. Thank you readers and followers, this happy moment has come to me because of you. You appreciate, inspire and comment me. This is the reason I write more and more. Thank you and God bless you all!(474 followers). Happy Thanksgiving everyone!🙏💖
Written in response to: Tanka-Tuesday-weekly-prompt
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Like a lover crawls around his girlfriend
the butterfly crawls on the flowers
they try to seduce each other
the joy of satisfaction
experience of love
in togetherness
the nectar sucked
both of them
enjoyed
fun
©️ janeaguiar
Written in response to: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2021/11/16/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-252-photoprompt/
⭐I tried Reverse Etheree for the first time. Please, let me know about it.🙏
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Pure white
symbol of peace
like an old woman’s hair
White cotton flowers take flight to
the sky
It can be seen stuck here and there
peace is felt everywhere
feels like winter
arrived
©️ janeaguiar
This post is part of https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2021/11/09/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-251-synonymsonly-or-tastetherainbow/
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My room
is neat and cool
where my soul gets attracted,
experienced all emotions
right here.
With her clean handkerchief
she gently wiped his face
trust tells me to embrace
his narrow path.
This print
strengthens my faith
in all the storms of life
whenever feel low and lonely
in life.
This post is part of Colleen’s Syllabic Challenge
⭐I tried combining two forms: for example, I wrote a Cinquain followed by an Abhanga and finished with another Cinquain.
This is my first try. Let me know, please.
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Late Post:
cool kind of kindness
gives pleasure or relief
an act of kindness
gives life to everyone
So, don’t expect a return
This post is part of Colleen’s Syllabic Challenge
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#Poetry Challenge No. 248
#Photoprompt
Wild
flowers
with perfect
medicinal
use
This post is part of https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2021/10/19/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-248-photoprompt/
Himalayan flowers and roots have been used in medicine since ancient times.💜
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