Identical Fractures… #poetry #free_verse

To go to another world
I reached death’s door
but my time had not come
so I had to come back.

The life that was
going to be lost
was taken by both hands.
My whole world changed.

The doctor took an x-ray
It was a rare case,
known as identical fractures.
Both hands wrapped up in plaster.

I had mixed feelings.
“by taking both hands in his hands,”said the doctor.
“Come on, let’s dance. “
Tears rolled down the cheeks.

Copyright ©️ 2022 Jane Aguiar

Written in response to:

what-do-you-see-170 by Sadje

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Desperate Mind… Published at Gobblers/ Masticadores.

I’m excited to announce that my poetry is published at Gobblers/Masticadores//Editores: Manuela Timofte/J re Crivello.

My sincere thanks to Mr. J. Re Crivello, Director and Founder of Gobblers/Masticador and his team

My poem is here 👇

Desperate Mind…#poetry

Don’t, don’t want silence
Don’t know,why you are sad
Don’t be this far away, come to my hug

Don’t keep everything in mind
Don’t be such a stranger
Tell me, where to find my friend

I would be honored if you Visit Here and
read the rest of my poem.

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Lost dream …#poetry #senryu

woman in between
became statue in sculptures
lost others contact

Dreams make us live
and make others live with us.
We strive and fight
to fulfill the dreams of others.

Birth is for dreams
and dreams are not for birth.
Dream teaches us to live
and fight even if we fail.

A dream is not just a dream
but a step towards action.
We achieve our dreams
by climbing one step at a time.

There is hope to win every fight.
Courage to make the dream come true.
Persistence and perseverance make us.
Even failure continues to shape us.

Failure is not the end
but it gives us new opportunities.
It guides and especially gives
the power to change direction.

One must be ready to accept change.
The purpose of all this is the dream
and the fulfillment of the dream.

Copyright ©️ 2022 Jane Aguiar

Pic credit: Miss Pooja

Written in response to:

what-do-you-see-168- by Sadje

w3-prompt-37-weave-written-weekly – by David

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Let the mind breathe freely #poetry…Published at Gobblers / Masticadores.

I’m glad to announce that my poetry is published at Gobblers/Masticadores//Editores: Manuela Timofte/J re Crivello.

My sincere thanks to Mr. J. Re Crivello, Director and Founder of Gobblers/Masticador and his team

Let the mind breathe freely…#poetry

How much do I want to tell you?
In this world,
only four walls surround me
Bothersome denials,
hopes vanishes in a moment
Restless dreams ……

I would be honored if you Visit Here and
read the rest of my poetry.

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Broken Pieces… #rhyme

On the bench of my village school
You told me, Jane, ‘you’re beautiful’

You were taking care of me
I was proud of you and me

The other girls were jealous
Every visit of yours made me nervous

I was trying to study
Your image was coming, my dear buddy

You were going to football practice
Your favorite dialogue, ‘Ma’am, I’m at your service ‘

One day a new girl came to school
You were looking at her, like a fool

You rented a heart and didn’t pay the rent,
You ignored the heart signals I sent

It was as If you had never seen a girl
She showed attitude with her curves and curls

You made her the destiny
To fight, I’m not an attorney

You broke my heart into tiny pieces
I don’t like these animal species

Copyright ©️ 2022 Jane Aguiar

⭐💫 May 2023 be a happy and successful year to all of you.💕

Written in response to:

skepticskaddish.com/2022/12/28/w3-prompt-35-weave-written-weekly

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Supreme…#Rhyme

Hey everyone,

I hope you all are doing well by the grace of God.

I am very happy to announce that I participated in the poetry competition “Hashtag Kalakar” and was placed 86th out of 11,980 entries.

My writing will be featured in their January edition magazine. I got the soft copy of it a few days ago and the ranking email yesterday. Thank you for your blessings!

With the magic of sight
In the starlite night
You stealed my heart
To never apart

We planted a rose
Daily water, is it’s dose
My angles of the lips
I’ve sealed with clips

Enter my mind
To digest my thoughts and grind
Just look at me
Just look back at me

Give me a shore
Please assure
Your presence is supreme
Can you imagine, why do I dream?

(86th rank)

⭐⭐(The featured poem is kept secret, I don’t know about it)

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Pic credit: Princess

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Curiosity…#kouta_form

Curiosity aroused
I spied the gift at first sight
Confusion of thoughts in mind
What will be the gift?

Sustained until santa went,
thought there would be chocolates
but santa brought a nice book
“Love” – by hook or crook

Copyright ©️ 2022 Jane Aguiar

Written in response to:

weekly-prompts-wednesday-challenge-curiosities by GC and Sue W

what-do-you-see-166 by Sadje

⭐⭐ I tried #Kouta_form ( version 2). Learn to write it here 👉poetscollective.org/poetryforms/kouta

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Power Of Love #tetractys

Love
can be
the best and
worst part of life.
Love has the power to either settle life
Or lead you down the road to hell with love.
It’s time to change,
the law of
nature
is
change.
Secrets
sing at any
moment so no
one waits for the bubble to burst in love.

Copyright ©️ 2022 Jane Aguiar

Pic credit: Ndzo.x✓

Written in response to:

w3-prompt-34-weave-written-weekly by David

reenas-xploration-challenge-261 by Reena

⭐⭐ I tried Triple Tetractys. Learn to write it here 👉 tetractys

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Hypnotic promises #micro_poetry #senryu

life summary book
reveals hypnotic music
it’s a witchcraft art

promises broken
cannot be mended again
go away in peace

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Written in response to:

what-do-you-see-165 by Sadje

moonwashed-weekly-prompt-122-12-20-22-promises by Eugenia

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Wish…#lanturne

it’s
God’s wish
that the gift
i open be
mine

Copyright ©️ 2022 Jane Aguiar

Written in response to:

lifesfinewine -one-sentence-story-5 by Pooja

weekly-prompts-weekend-challenge-wish by Sue and GC

Pic credit:Nero

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