Patient’s comma stage
eyes wide open, no response
dramatic visit
doctor calls the patient ‘maa’
soul returns the longest day
It’s a copse of trees
reflected mirror image
shines a cryptic light
©️ Jane Aguiar
Pic Credit:Dreamstime stock photos
Written in response to:
tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-themeprompt by Colleen
moon-washed-weekly-challenge-dramatic by Eugenia
what-do-you-see by Sadje
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Fresh vegetation
that’s unsophisticated
verdant naive life
A form of beryl
crystallizes in a mass
prismatic crystals
mislabeled as emerald
it’s a stone named smaragdus
©️ Jane Aguiar
Pic Credit: Google and Pinterest
I have presented two forms: haiku and tanka. The words Verdant and Emerald represent colour.
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Childhood incident
train entry in the tunnel
darkness everywhere
I closed my eyes and opened
only when I felt the light
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Pic. Credit: Pinterest
Written in response to: Reena’s xploration Challenge
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Our lady visited
about two years later now
festive occasion
anger resentment forgot
grand celebration was held
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This is my 100th post and Luckily it’s “Our Lady” #Tanka. Thank you readers and followers, this happy moment has come to me because of you. You appreciate, inspire and comment me. This is the reason I write more and more. Thank you and God bless you all!(474 followers). Happy Thanksgiving everyone!🙏💖
Written in response to: Tanka-Tuesday-weekly-prompt
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Private road ahead
slow down your vehicles here
speed limit 5 Mph
avoid reckless drive, take care
it’s for safety of you all
This post is part of #Writephoto by KL Caley
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Late Post:
cool kind of kindness
gives pleasure or relief
an act of kindness
gives life to everyone
So, don’t expect a return
This post is part of Colleen’s Syllabic Challenge
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Filter life’s burden
Try to throw residue out
Become like filtrate
Make your heart clean like filtrate
Let’s be healthy and happy
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Clear water is collected in the beaker as filtrate, and muddy particles on the filter paper as residue. This process is called Muddy water filtration.
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Colourless liquid
Pleasant ethereal smell
But non – flammable
Leads olfactory fatigue
Does not dissolve in water
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The burbling springs flowed
Over diamonds of moss
A pure scenic view
Chirping of canopy birds
The influence of nature
This post is part of What Do You See by Sadje
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One day, the house of the owner of Rooster and Kitty(a female cat) smells like mistress is cooking something delicious.
While playing, Rooster asks Kitty to peek through the kitchen window. Kitty climbs on Rooster’s body and peeks into the kitchen, where she sees Rooster’s wife’s wings in the kitchen. After glancing around, when she sees chicken and potatoes being cooked in a pot, Kitty immediately recognizes what the mistress is cooking.
Rooster’s eyes darken because his wife had just laid nine eggs and his plan was to give life to all nine eggs. She was going to sit on eggs, but something different happened here.
Another bad thing happens, the owner thinks of making mixed fried rice as a guest will come to the house.The mistress picks up an egg, and when she touches it, the egg becomes frightened.
The one who is stupid becomes overwhelmed, when he sees others pain.
One goes into depression thinking, “Today is you, tomorrow is me.”
One understands, today is the turn of the other, tomorrow I may also have this turn, so It becomes sad.
One thinks, we get the best life . It is happy thinking that God is making good use of us.
The last one is Joyful, it thinks, whatever happens, happens for the better and God’s plans God knows.
Here, Kitty cleanses the rooster, just as she cleans her limbs by spitting, so she cleans the Rooster by spitting. Rooster comes to consciousness but his condition is not good. His condition is expressed in this tanka.
No expectations
Dreams shattered in a minute
Human’s tasty buds
Not allows us to survive
God! What kind of life is this?
This post is part of Reena’s xploration Challenge
This is what we all think💜
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