God Exists #senryu #tanka

desperate prayers
God is under pressure now
to show existence

water becomes ice
ice melts and becomes water
it’s reversible
water turns into the steam
steam turns back into water

silvery white silk
profuse feathers on the back
are you an angel?

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Written in response to:

what-do-you-see-160- by Sadje

Reenas-xploration-challenge-256 by Reena

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Cryptic…#tanka #haiku

Patient’s comma stage
eyes wide open, no response
dramatic visit
doctor calls the patient ‘maa’
soul returns the longest day

It’s a copse of trees
reflected mirror image
shines a cryptic light

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Written in response to:

tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-themeprompt by Colleen

moon-washed-weekly-challenge-dramatic by Eugenia

what-do-you-see by Sadje

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Verdant Prosperity #haiku #tanka

Fresh vegetation
that’s unsophisticated
verdant naive life

A form of beryl
crystallizes in a mass
prismatic crystals
mislabeled as emerald
it’s a stone named smaragdus

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I have presented two forms: haiku and tanka. The words Verdant and Emerald represent colour.

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Our Lady #Tanka

Our lady visited
about two years later now
festive occasion
anger resentment forgot
grand celebration was held

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Good evening !

This is my 100th post and Luckily it’s “Our Lady” #Tanka. Thank you readers and followers, this happy moment has come to me because of you. You appreciate, inspire and comment me. This is the reason I write more and more. Thank you and God bless you all!(474 followers). Happy Thanksgiving everyone!🙏💖

Written in response to: Tanka-Tuesday-weekly-prompt

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Filtrate #Tanka

Filter life’s burden
Try to throw residue out
Become like filtrate
Make your heart clean like filtrate
Let’s be healthy and happy

This post is part of

Reena’s xploration Challenge

Clear water is collected in the beaker as filtrate, and muddy particles on the filter paper as residue. This process is called Muddy water filtration.

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