

My Syllabic Form๐
1) Title is needed
2) Total 29 syllables
3) Pattern 3/5/3/9/9
4) The meaning should be felt after connecting the first two lines.
5) The third line should give meaning, without breaking the first two lines and losing their meaning.
6) The third line is not a pivot line
7) The meaning should be felt after connecting the last two lines.
8) The last two lines should not add any meaning to the third line as it is not the pivot line.
9) When all five lines are read, they must find meaning.
๐ In (A, B, C) ” I” is the ninth letter so the pattern in descending order will be: I I C E C . This is the reason, I named this form as ICE form
Fell in love
it is not yet known
no regrets
the dream disappeared when I woke up
my love, the night changes me and you
ยฉ๏ธ Jane Aguiar
Written in response to:
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Stay Blessed! ๐
Beautiful crafting Jane. I love how you turned the message around. Bravo!!!!!!
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Thank you so very much!
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Thank’s for share, Jane.
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Welcome, Elvira!
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Have a great weekend, Jane!
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You too, Elvira!
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Thank’s, Jane! ๐
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Wonderful read, Jane. A good and commendable response to the prompt.
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Thank you so very much, Lamittan!
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Sure. Feel most welcome, Jane. ๐
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My pleasure, Lamittan ๐
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what a great job on the prompt Jane with wonderful questions asked..,well done! ๐๐๐ป
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Thank you my friend, Cindy!๐พโ๏ธ
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Youโre so welcome Jane๐
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I love the name you’ve given it. Great poem, Jane! ๐
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Sometimes everything changes overnight. Thatโs why I discovered poetry on the subject and created a new form.Thank you my friend, Yvette!๐
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Great crafting Jane. I think youโve done a marvelous job of following the rules and writing this poem.
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Thank you so much my friend, Sadje!
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Youโre welcome Jane. It was difficult task but you did it so well. Iโm all admiration
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Oh you are so sweet Thanks again for the appreciative comment, Sadje!
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My pleasure dear friend
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Gorgeous poem, Jane. Is beautiful. โค๏ธ
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Thank you so very much for beautiful comment , Jeff!๐
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Youโre most welcome, Jane. Always! โค๏ธ
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Beautiful ,โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Thank you so much, Reena! Welcome back my friend. ๐
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how lovely, Jane!
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Thank you so much, David!โค๏ธ
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This is a marvelous read dear Jane. โฃ๏ธ
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Glad to know that you enjoyed, Daphny ๐ฅฐ โค๏ธ
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I always do dear Jane, you are a brilliant writer my friend. โค๏ธ
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Pleasure dear! Glad to read that you think so. You are also a great writer and poet. I too enjoy your writing, Daphny! โค๏ธ
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Thank you Jane! You are such a sweet person. โฃ๏ธ๐
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That’s my pleasure. So nice of you, Daphny. โค๏ธ๐ค
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What a fabulous form, Jane. I like how you thought out all the angles! Well done! โค
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Glad to know that, you liked my poetic form. Thank you so much, Colleen! ๐ฅฐโค๏ธ
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All the creativity… You wowed me. ๐ โค
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Yes, of course my friend Colleen. โค๏ธ
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Thank you so much, Colleen! โค๏ธ
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Oh how brilliantly you did this๐โจ
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Glad you liked it. Thank you so much, Pragalbha! โค๏ธ
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You are very welocme Jane with Love.
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Night changes poem so awesome ๐ท๐๐ป๐ lovely wishes ๐
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Thank you so much, Thattamma!
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Wonderful, Jane! Nice crafting.
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Thanks a lot, dear Poonam!
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Thank you!
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