

My Syllabic Form🙂
1) Title is needed
2) Total 29 syllables
3) Pattern 3/5/3/9/9
4) The meaning should be felt after connecting the first two lines.
5) The third line should give meaning, without breaking the first two lines and losing their meaning.
6) The third line is not a pivot line
7) The meaning should be felt after connecting the last two lines.
8) The last two lines should not add any meaning to the third line as it is not the pivot line.
9) When all five lines are read, they must find meaning.
🌟 In (A, B, C) ” I” is the ninth letter so the pattern in descending order will be: I I C E C . This is the reason, I named this form as ICE form
Fell in love
it is not yet known
no regrets
the dream disappeared when I woke up
my love, the night changes me and you
©️ Jane Aguiar
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Stay Blessed! 💞
Beautiful crafting Jane. I love how you turned the message around. Bravo!!!!!!
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Thank you so very much!
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Thank’s for share, Jane.
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Welcome, Elvira!
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Have a great weekend, Jane!
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You too, Elvira!
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Thank’s, Jane! 😊
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🍁👍🏻
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🍀👍🏼
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Wonderful read, Jane. A good and commendable response to the prompt.
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Thank you so very much, Lamittan!
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Sure. Feel most welcome, Jane. 💖
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My pleasure, Lamittan 🍁
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🙏🕊🌱🙏
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(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧
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what a great job on the prompt Jane with wonderful questions asked..,well done! 💖🌈🌻
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Thank you my friend, Cindy!🌾☘️
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You’re so welcome Jane💕
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💕❤️🙌
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I love the name you’ve given it. Great poem, Jane! 🙂
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Sometimes everything changes overnight. That’s why I discovered poetry on the subject and created a new form.Thank you my friend, Yvette!🙂
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Great crafting Jane. I think you’ve done a marvelous job of following the rules and writing this poem.
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Thank you so much my friend, Sadje!
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You’re welcome Jane. It was difficult task but you did it so well. I’m all admiration
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Oh you are so sweet Thanks again for the appreciative comment, Sadje!
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My pleasure dear friend
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🍬🍭
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Gorgeous poem, Jane. Is beautiful. ❤️
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Thank you so very much for beautiful comment , Jeff!🙂
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You’re most welcome, Jane. Always! ❤️
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Beautiful ,❤️❤️
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Thank you so much, Reena! Welcome back my friend. 🙂
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❤️❤️❣️
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how lovely, Jane!
❤
David
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Thank you so much, David!❤️
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This is a marvelous read dear Jane. ❣️
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Glad to know that you enjoyed, Daphny 🥰 ❤️
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I always do dear Jane, you are a brilliant writer my friend. ❤️
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Pleasure dear! Glad to read that you think so. You are also a great writer and poet. I too enjoy your writing, Daphny! ❤️
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Thank you Jane! You are such a sweet person. ❣️😇
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That’s my pleasure. So nice of you, Daphny. ❤️🤗
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🤗❣️
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❤️❤️
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What a fabulous form, Jane. I like how you thought out all the angles! Well done! ❤
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Glad to know that, you liked my poetic form. Thank you so much, Colleen! 🥰❤️
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All the creativity… You wowed me. 😀 ❤
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Yes, of course my friend Colleen. ❤️
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❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you so much, Colleen! ❤️
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Oh how brilliantly you did this💛✨
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Glad you liked it. Thank you so much, Pragalbha! ❤️
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You are very welocme Jane with Love.
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💖💖
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Night changes poem so awesome 🌷👍🏻🙏 lovely wishes 👏
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Thank you so much, Thattamma!
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🌷🙏❤️🌷
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Wonderful, Jane! Nice crafting.
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Thanks a lot, dear Poonam!
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Thank you!
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