I lost a lover along the way
Reveals deep pain
But transformation, a new ray
A broken flower likes to hang but does not fall
You said,’you hurt me too much,enough Jane’
I lost a lover along the way
Recharge the system, I love it all
A broken heart stands again
But transformation, a new ray
Love has taken its toll
Brain runs like a metro train
I lost a lover along the way
A withered flower has to live till it falls
Life needs little rain
But transformation, a new ray
Respond to me before nightfall
Don’t like strain
I lost a lover along the way
But transformation, a new ray
©️ Jane Aguiar
Written in response to:
Reena’s xploration Challenge -246
👉 Learn to write villanelle Here
⭐⭐highlighted words or phrases are mostly used in Tarot Card Reading.
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Ah, it is indeed inside of pain where the possibility of transformation lives. A lovely write, dear Jane. ❤️
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Thank you for appreciation, dear Jeff ❤️
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You’re most welcome, dear Jane. Always. ❤️
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❤️❤️
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Beautiful poem Jane!
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Thank you so much,Sunith!
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This is so beautiful Jane. Tugging at the heartstrings of the reader.
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Thank you so much for appreciation, Sadje!
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You’re most welcome
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❤️❤️
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Each of us is in the process of transformation into greater things. ^_^
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Yes, indeed and exactly.(✿^‿^)
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You’re welcome, Jane.
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❤️❤️
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Transformation is always a new day. So aptly put….
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Thank you so very much, Reena 😊
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A new ray ….Villanelle by Jane Aguiar
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Thanks dear Reena!
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Beautiful take, Jane.
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Thank you,Jude!
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Thank you so much!
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Transformation is a journey that one has to undertake either by choice or chance. Beautiful thoughts, Jane 👌👌
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Thank you so very much,KK💖
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My pleasure, Jane !!
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Such a stunning poem about loss and love my friend
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Thank you so much, Lashelle!
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You’re welcome!
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❤️
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What a lovely write on transformation, Jane.
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Thanks a lot, Punam!
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Very well written dear Jane. ❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Daphny ❤️
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You’re most welcome, dear Jane! ❤️
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❤️❤️
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Thank you for sharing 😊
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It’s great journey of love. It’s magnifico.
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I agree my friend
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I couldn’t say it anymore better.
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I understand 🙂
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Thank you, Reena!
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you so much!
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