Pure white
symbol of peace
like an old woman’s hair
White cotton flowers take flight to
the sky
It can be seen stuck here and there
peace is felt everywhere
feels like winter
arrived
©️ janeaguiar
This post is part of https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2021/11/09/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-251-synonymsonly-or-tastetherainbow/
Thank you for reading.
Stay Blessed!
Smiling here. ☺️ That’s a beautiful poem, wonderful imagery, and a lovely message. Love it, Jane. ❤️
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I’m glad you liked it. Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Jeff♥️
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You’re most welcome, Jane. Always my pleasure to read you. ❤️
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Thanks for reading my post so hopefully….♥️
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🥰❤️
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♥️👍🏻
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Looks like snow flakes.
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Yes, exactly…I did mistake. As per rule didn’t mention colour in the poem and it’s metaphor. When I realized mistake, tried to correct it by writing one more.
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Very warm poem. I love it. You make me like white hair 👵
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Haha…not become warm only become👵…. thank you for enjoying poem ♥️
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Thanks to you for letting me enjoy.
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You are most welcome, dear 😊
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🥰🥰🥰
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Love your work but a little confused. I thought a cinquain was based on five lines and done with symmetry. I know so many different things are happening in the poetry world. Your work is lovely and I want to know more. Can anyone be a part of this?
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Yes, off course. You can follow Colleen and join her. Her link is in my post. There are many forms of poems. Colleen tells in her post what to do and how to do👍🏻
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White: for peace and purity.🤍
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Yes, 💯. Thanks 😊
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Lovely imagery, Jane! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Harmony ❣️
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Gorgeous poem, I love the imagery. It’s fantastic
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Thank you so much,Deb❣️
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‘Pure white symbol of peace like an old woman’s hair’ – this is so beautiful. Love your poem and your imagery.
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Thank you for reading and appreciating me!💜
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This is lovely 😊
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Thanks,dear!😊
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You’re welcome 🤗
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🤗♥️
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you so much! 😊
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chaste
do not make haste
to taste
and not waste
the time
sublime
white hot
not so bad
eh?
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Wonderful! Is this your latest post?
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oh perhaps. i get manic and write up that storm , which for me, is the norm. in short yes of course.!!!
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Thank you for sharing!👍🏻
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surely
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This is lovely, Jane! Beautifully crafted.
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Thank you so much, Eugenia!😊
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My pleasure, Jane! 😊
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Beautiful lines ❤thank you.
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Thank you so much! ❣️
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My pleasure 🙂🎉stay happy and blessed forever 🙂❤
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Thank you for blessings! God bless you too ❣️
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🙂🎉🙂🙂🙂
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☺️🤗
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☺🌹💓
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♥️🥀
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Stay happy and blessed ☺🌹💓😄
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You too ❣️
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I’m happy ☺😇🤭💖
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👍👍👍🎉🎉💞❤
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Such a beauty, this butterfly. 🙏🏾
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Thank you so much!Jude😊
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Such a pleasure 🙏🏾
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Lovely treasure 😍
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Hi Jane! I truly enjoyed reading your insightful, motivating words.
As the proverb states, “Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery!” In other words, your pièce de résistance inspired my own (pale by comparison) verse. Being respectful of your copyright, I would never post my work on my site, sans your permission. That said, I await your authorization; but will readily (albeit regrettably) accept your “NO”, as well. I’ve composed and saved my draft so it’s already ready to go to (word) press…
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You can post your work, I have no problem…. thanks for information. I will visit your site.
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Thank you!
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Most welcome!
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Thanks!
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Jane, this beautiful! The new challenge (#TankaTuesday) will publish tomorrow. Perhaps you’ll join in? We’d love to have you. ❤
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I will join you but if I do mistakes, correct me please…..it will publish. Let it be I don’t mind….Good night♥️
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No worries, Jane. We’re all learning syllabic poetry together. Hugs to you my friend. ❤
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Thank you dear, Colleen! 🤗♥️
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Thanks a lot, Colleen!
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Amazing!
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Thanks! 😊
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