Once the fire was burning with anger. The flames rose so high that sparks were soaring in the sky. The Gods were so frightened that they ran to God Varuna and he arranged rain to calm the fire.
From then on, the fire seemed to have something attractive in the water. He found her cool and sweet. So when water falls on him, his anger calms down, but the water realises how hot the fire was and how difficult it was to live with him.
The two still love each other, but from a distance, as the water tries to get closer to the fire, it evaporates.
Your fragrance in me
reminds me of the rainbow
come back o’ my life
fickle mind is not stable
life without you is sketchy
©️ Jane Aguiar
Pic Credit: Pinterest
Written in response to: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2022/03/22/tankatuesday-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-266-3-22-22-themeprompt/
Eugi’s Weekly Prompt – soaring
⭐ I had to give a home visit last week due to the low number of children in our school and so I couldn’t publish or visit your blogs. I apologise.
The education system is suffering as children drop out of school. Knowing their problems, we are now trying to solve them.
Thank you for reading.
Stay Blessed! 💞
Oh my, the imagery of this one is magnificent! I love how you use fire and water in this and their need for the other, wonderfully done dear Jane.
Indeed the education system is suffering and I’m glad you are there to help out, hope it is resolved. Really proud of the work you do dear, kudos to you all. ❤️❤️
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What a nice comment you made, dear Daphny. Thank you for enjoying Tankaprose. Yes, the education system is organizing many workshops and procedures for this. Thanks again, dear❤️❤️
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You’re most welcome dear!
That is quite a relief to know, so proud of the work you do. ❤️
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My pleasure, dear Daphny!❤️ That is part of our duty, dear.
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❤️❤️❤️❤️
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❤️❤️❤️
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A beautiful poem Jane. Take care! You’re doing a wonderful job.
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Thank you so much, dear Sadje! ♥️ You too take care.
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You’re welcome my friend
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My pleasure, dear!
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👍🏼
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i see. ice . fire and water and someone s daughter. i suppose
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Thanks a lot, dear John!❤️
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yw
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❤️❤️
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moods.
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😊
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Wow! So beautiful poem Jane. Thank’ s for share.
Have a wonderful weekend!
Elvira
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Thank you so much, dear Elvira! You too have a wonderful weekend.
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You are welcome, dear Jane. You as well.
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❤️
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🙏🏻💖
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Truly, a beautiful poem, Jane! I’m so proud of the work you do. ❤️
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Thank you from the bottom of my heart, dear Eugenia! ❤️
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You’re welcome. Jane.💖
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It is staggering how many families just stopped sending their kiddos to school.
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Students do not listen to parents. We had a lot of complaints from parents so we needed a visit. Thank you, dear ❤️
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Prayers for you as you continue to do more of these visits.
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Thank you so much, dear. 🤗❤️
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This is such a masterful piece of writing. The imagery is amazing and works perfectly in symbolizing how a relationship can be feel when things are out of balance and painful. But you’re not only a wonderful poet, Jane, you’re also a wonderful human being, and the work you do to help others (especially children) is truly noble and loving. Much respect to you, my friend. 🙂
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Thank you from the bottom of my heart, dear Mike! My duty starts with the children and ends with the children. Children are our future. Talking or playing with them relieves our stress. Thank you once again ❤️
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This is sooo beautiful! Thank you for sharing this.
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Thanks a lot, Weng!
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So awesome post and poem , truth can read 😍👍🏻Best wishes 🌷🙏♥️🌷
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Thank you so much, dear Thattamma! ❤️
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Most welcome dear 🌷🙏♥️🌷
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Wonderfully done! Love this, Jane 💕🙂
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Thank you so much, dear Harmony!🙂 💕
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Oh, how lovely. Thank you, Jane.
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Thank you so much, dear Selma! 💕🤗
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Beautiful poem.. 💕
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Thank you, Kirti!💕
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This is so beautiful, Jane. Wonderful poetry. ❤
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Thank you sooo much, dear Colleen 🥰❤️
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wow this is brilliant Jane! 💖💖👏
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Thank you so much, dear Cindy! 💖🥰
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It’s a pleasure always Jane!
💕♥️
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💕❤️💕
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Thank you dear Colleen ❤️
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Jane, this was beautiful! I love the love story between fire and water here. (And never apologize for focusing on the well-being of children. What you do is important and appreciated!) 🙂
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Yes, you are absolutely right. Thank you so much, dear Yvette! 🙂
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This is so lovely, Jane – I love this story! I assume it’s part of your religious tradition?
❤
David
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No, I am a Roman Catholic. Varun is the God of Hinduism. I just used his name, everything else is fiction.Thank you, dear David ❤️
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thanks – your poem just made me very curious!
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You are most welcome. Thank you once again, dear David ❤️
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Thank you for all you are doing for our children, Jane. It breaks my heart to see the suffering. Your poem is beautiful and so relatable. 💗
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Many parents have lost their jobs and our young generation is doing their duty but their future will be in danger if they do not complete their studies. They have the right to study. Thank you so much, dear Gwen ❤️
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Amazing write, Jane! I love them both. ❤️
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Thank you so much, dear Jeff! Glad you like it.❤️
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So beautiful, and sad too.
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Thank you so much, Jude 💙
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Thank you my friend for sharing 💙
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you!
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it’s my pleasure to hear from you plz
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This is beautiful.
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Thank you so much, dear Eunice! ❤️
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